A few things I noticed: -The crease at the elbow joint seems to continue a bit far towards the elbow. The muscles and tissue in that area should create a nice, plump bulge that end the crease earlier--if that makes sense. Just check a few photo references, I think you'll see what I mean. Same goes for the knee, but not so noticeable. -Her hair, while the detail is lovely, it seems a bit solid. I believe you could remedy this with more depth and areas of deeper shadow. The back-lighting you have on her hair is stellar, though! -I think something white or lighter (accessories, skin tone, maybe the lighter section of the dress, flowers, butterflies, whatever) could really make this whole piece pop more. Other than the sparkles on the dress and some of the back-lighting, the lighter half of the color range seems under-utilized in making the rest of the piece stand out more.
Those items aside, the dress is amazing! It look like the petals of a beautiful flower, and the detail you put into the sparkles and ruffles are amazing. The colors are gorgeous. Overall, a solid job on the anatomy.
A few things I noticed:
-The crease at the elbow joint seems to continue a bit far towards the elbow. The muscles and tissue in that area should create a nice, plump bulge that end the crease earlier--if that makes sense. Just check a few photo references, I think you'll see what I mean. Same goes for the knee, but not so noticeable.
-Her hair, while the detail is lovely, it seems a bit solid. I believe you could remedy this with more depth and areas of deeper shadow. The back-lighting you have on her hair is stellar, though!
-I think something white or lighter (accessories, skin tone, maybe the lighter section of the dress, flowers, butterflies, whatever) could really make this whole piece pop more. Other than the sparkles on the dress and some of the back-lighting, the lighter half of the color range seems under-utilized in making the rest of the piece stand out more.
Those items aside, the dress is amazing! It look like the petals of a beautiful flower, and the detail you put into the sparkles and ruffles are amazing. The colors are gorgeous. Overall, a solid job on the anatomy.
Keep it up!
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